Sunday, April 21, 2013

Joyce Sidman - NCTE Award for Poetry for Children


Sidman, J.  (2007).  This is just to say:  Poems of apology and forgiveness.  Ill. P. Zagarensky.  New York, NY:  Houghton Mifflin.  ISBN 0-618-61680-2.

One of my favorite books of poetry this semester, This is Just to Say: Poems of Apology and Forgiveness is so realistic in its fictional setting and characters that I almost needed to reread the introduction to make sure that it is the work of one author.  Sidman is the newest recipient of the National Council of Teachers of English Award for Poetry for Children.  This book demonstrates her creativity and a writing style that is engaging and entertaining while still using poetic language and introducing different poetic styles. 

Broken into two parts, the fictional students from Mrs. Merz’s sixth grade class write poems apologizing and asking for forgiveness in “Part 1 Apologies.”  Then as an afterthought, the students decided to seek responses to the original poems, and “Part 2 Responses” was created.  The poems in both parts pair with each other.  Students reading the book will find themselves flipping back to Part 1 while they read Part 2 in order to remind themselves of the content of the first poems as they read the responses.  The poems cover a variety of topics from apologizing to classmates, siblings, and parents; to feeling sad over the loss of pets and parents; to confessions of stealing the class lizard (which died) and rubbing the school’s namesake statue’s nose. 

Supposedly inspired by William Carlos Williams’s poem “This is Just to Say,” the students in Mrs. Merz’s class bare all, sometimes in a serious way, sometimes silly.  Sometimes sincere in their apologies, sometimes not so much.

Take the first and last stanzas of Thomas’s poem of apology to Mrs. Garcia in the office:

            This is Just to Say

            I have stolen
the jelly doughnuts
            that were in
            the teachers’ lounge
            . . . .
            too bad
            the powdered sugar
            spilled all over my shirt
            and gave me
            away

and Mrs. Garcia’s response back which ends:

            Dear Thomas

            Of course I forgive you.
            But I still have to call your mother.

The format of this book offers students who read it some great inspiration of their own in writing poetry.  Some different types of poems, such as haiku and pantoum are defined and demonstrated.  Students who owe someone an apology might be inspired to write that person a poem while being relieved to find in the book that the transgressions were long ago forgiven and forgotten by parents and teachers. 

Although this book of poetry is by a group of fictional sixth graders, the poems are fun, funny, serious, and sensitive, and students of all ages will be able to relate to the topics of the poems.  Who among us has not needed to apologize or respond to an apology?  This book is on my recommended list for my high school students who want to read poetry that is easily accessible, relevant, and enjoyable. 

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